Waiting with bated breath

I couldn't give you an overall ten, because I'm worried that the final piece might never get made if there's no motivation for improvement. As a college student without a TV, I count on NG for all my cartoon and film needs, and if there continue to be more submissions like yours (especially finished ones) I may never own a TV again. This piece is not just a glimpse of a possible world future, it is also a glimpse of the future of flash art.

Excellent despite some supurfluity

Excellent, excellent piece. The music selections didn't simply accompany the piece, they complimented it. The words at the end were uneccessary, but one does generally feel some need to make an explination for a piece of work. I personally could have done without the 'and so he saves the day' and 'what's up with that anyway?' in reference to the cat. These meanings were already self-evident in the work, so the continued reference adds nothing to the force of the work, and rather detracts from its motion.

Keep it up, looking forward to your next piece, as this one is my current fave (love that f-zero song, too).